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Chapter 14 · The Subplot

15. Further Reading

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Annotated, grouped by what each source is good for. Starred items are the recommended first three.

15.1 On multiple plots specifically

  • ★ Levin, Richard. The Multiple Plot in English Renaissance Drama (1971). The indispensable book for this chapter and still without a rival on its subject. Read it for the categories — analogy, contrast, direct linkage — and for the sustained argument that thematic relation is a form of integration rather than a substitute for one. Its examples are plays; the transfer to the novel requires the adjustments set out at §3.2 and §9.8.
  • ★ Empson, William. Some Versions of Pastoral (1935), chapter 2, “Double Plots”. Forty pages that changed how the double plot is discussed. Read it for the argument that juxtaposition generates meaning belonging to neither term. Empson is allusive and assumes his examples; read the Henry IV material first.
  • Bradley, A. C. Shakespearean Tragedy (1904). For the opposing case, honestly made: the chapters on King Lear treat the double action as a defect of dramatic clarity while conceding what it gains. Useful because Bradley is not a fool and is not persuaded.

15.2 On the distribution of narrative attention

  • ★ Woloch, Alex. The One vs. the Many (2003). The book that converts a craft metaphor into an analytic. Chapter 13 (The Viewpoint Shift) uses it for character; this chapter uses it for plot. The introduction and the chapter on Le Père Goriot are sufficient for most purposes.
  • Chatman, Seymour. Story and Discourse (1978). For the kernel/satellite distinction, which is the sharpest single instrument in this chapter. The relevant discussion is short and can be read in an hour.
  • Moretti, Franco. Graphs, Maps, Trees (2005), and his later work treating plots as networks. For the argument that formal change in the novel is legible as a function of quantity and market. Contested, and worth arguing with.

15.3 On plot, causality and desire

  • Brooks, Peter. Reading for the Plot (1984). For why readers want the main plot to continue, which is the psychological basis of the attention tax. The chapters on the dilatory space of the middle bear directly on §4.3.
  • Forster, E. M. Aspects of the Novel (1927). The chapters on pattern and rhythm are the oldest usable defence of a novel unified by shape rather than by causality — and, in the same pages, the most honest account of what such unity costs.
  • Aristotle, Poetics. Short, and worth reading in full rather than in quotation, chiefly to discover how little of what is attributed to it is there.

15.4 Cognitive work relevant to braiding

  • Emmott, Catherine. Narrative Comprehension (1997). The best available account of how readers hold and resume suspended narrative frames. Directly underwrites §6.6, and the only cognitive source in this chapter that a writer will find immediately usable.
  • Zwaan and Radvansky, “Situation Models in Language Comprehension and Memory” (1998). A review article; the clearest statement of the dimensions readers track and the costs incurred when they shift. A thread crossing shifts all of them at once.

15.5 Craft manuals, used critically

  • Swain, Dwight V. Techniques of the Selling Writer (1965). The origin of the goal–conflict–disaster engine on which this chapter’s definition of a subplot depends. Mid-century American commercial pedagogy; mechanistic in idiom, structurally sound, and honest about its own purposes.
  • McKee, Robert. Story (1997). For the screen tradition’s account of subplot function, which is the source of much prose craft advice on the subject and should be read as such. Its assumption of a single primary investment is the assumption §3.8 qualifies.
  • Yorke, John. Into the Woods (2013). The clearest popular statement of the view that subplots must mirror the main plot thematically. Read it beside §8.4 and decide whether the mirror it recommends is Levin’s analogy or the redundancy the chapter warns against.

15.6 Within this textbook

  • Chapter 2 (Scene and Sequel) — the goal–conflict–disaster engine and the causal chain, on which this chapter’s definition entirely depends.
  • Chapter 5 (The Transition) — the mechanics of every crossing between threads, and the orientation costs they incur.
  • Chapter 6 (The Chapter Break) — where the crossings are placed, and the proposition–payoff mechanism that makes suspension productive.
  • Chapter 13 (The Viewpoint Shift) — the empathy budget; the same argument as the attention tax, applied to identification rather than to page space. Woloch is the shared source.
  • Chapter 7 (Backstory and Flashback) — the interest deficit, and the distinction between a concurrent thread and an analepsis.
  • Chapter 9 (The Opening Pages) — the formal contract, which a multi-plot novel must open early (§5.4).
  • Chapter 16 (The Ending) — what convergence must finally deliver, and the problem of the overloaded final scene.