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Chapter 15 · The Reveal

4. The Taxonomy

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Reveals are classified here in two ways: by what the disclosure changes, which decides how far back it reaches, and by where it falls, which decides what it leaves the reader wanting. Two rulings follow, on proposals that earlier chapters left to this one.

Four objects of a reveal

The reveal of event discloses what happened: a death that was a murder, a past act that explains the present. It recasts the passages that described the event’s surface, and usually the behaviour of whoever knew. In Daphne du Maurier’s Rebecca (1938) Maxim tells the narrator, after a diver finds Rebecca’s boat in the bay, that he killed his first wife and that he hated her, and every scene in which the narrator read his silences as grief for Rebecca is recast. Its preparation lies in the surface of events: an absence, a timing, an object out of place.

The reveal of identity discloses who someone is: the benefactor is a convict, the stranger a brother, the dead man the narrator. In Great Expectations (1860–61) Magwitch’s return in chapter 39 discloses that Pip’s fortune was his, and every scene in which Pip assumed Miss Havisham’s design is recast. Its preparation lies in what a character is permitted to do or not to do while the reader holds the wrong identity, and its danger is that a single scene showing the character doing what the true identity forbids will void it.

The reveal of motive discloses why: an act the reader has watched is given a different reason. At chapter scale it is the motive supplied last that The Chapter Break (Chapter 6) describes, Okonkwo’s He was afraid of being thought weak; at book scale it can turn a villain or a saint inside out. Its preparation is the act itself, shown in enough detail that the second motive fits it as well as the first. The household novel’s largest reveal is of this kind as well as of event: the reader has watched the father count the till twice and pocket the pen, and learns at the end that he did these things as a man putting his affairs in order.

The reveal of telling discloses something about the text the reader has been reading: who wrote it, why, or that part of it is untrue. The Murder of Roger Ackroyd discloses that its narrator is the murderer; Gillian Flynn’s Gone Girl (2012) discloses that one of its two alternating texts is a fabrication; Ian McEwan’s Atonement (2001) discloses that the novel is the work of one of its characters, and that its happiest scene did not happen. This kind reaches furthest, because it can recast every page, and it is the kind the teller rule below governs.

A single disclosure often has two objects, as the household’s does, and the classification is used to find the passages a reveal must recast, not to file it. An identity reveal recasts the scenes in which the character appeared; a reveal of telling recasts the whole text the teller controlled.

Three positions

Where a reveal falls decides what it gives the reader in exchange for the question it answers. The chapter calls the new question the successor question.

The early reveal comes in the first third and turns a book that could have run on curiosity into one that runs on consequence. Karen Joy Fowler’s We Are All Completely Beside Ourselves (2013) discloses at about a quarter of its length a fact a more conventional book would have kept for its end, and the successor question is no longer what was Fern? but what was done to her, and to the family that raised her? (Worked Analyses).

The turn reveal comes near the middle and changes the book’s engine, usually from curiosity to suspense. Part Two of Gone Girl opens on Amy alive; the question what happened to Amy? is answered, and replaced by what will she do, and will Nick survive it? A turn reveal is one way to make the midpoint that The Middle (Chapter 11) places at the centre of a book, and it must be followed by a book that uses the new question, or the second half will feel like an epilogue.

The closing reveal comes in the last part and has no successor question within the book; what it gives the reader is the double reading itself. Atonement’s coda and Christie’s last chapter are closing reveals. Because nothing comes after, a closing reveal is judged almost entirely by its preparation and its range.

The declined reveal: a ruling on the epistemological domain

The Viewpoint Shift (Chapter 13) proposed an epistemological domain for viewpoint: a grant of several vantages made to show that none can know what happened, so that the reader is given irresolution rather than assembly. It adopted the domain for diagnosis and conceded three objections: that it may be contrast plus unreliability, that its examples cluster in modernist fiction, and that it names what a structure means rather than what a grant buys. It left this chapter to adopt or reject it at the scale of a book, since a reveal is the adjudication the domain refuses.

This chapter adopts it at the scale of a book, as the plural-vantage form of a wider category, the declined reveal: a book that holds a question of fact open to its end and shows the reader that it is doing so. The first objection is answered at this scale, because it supplies the test that separates the two. Contrast plus unreliability ends in a reveal that tells the reader which account to discount; the epistemological domain ends without one, and the reader who took any single account would believe something the book will not confirm. The third objection lapses, because what a structure means is a reveal’s own subject. The second stands in part. The declined reveal is commoner in literary than in commercial fiction, though The Affair’s first season keeps its two lovers’ memories unreconciled on screen, and Yann Martel’s Life of Pi (2001) ends by offering one teller’s two accounts of a voyage and asking which the listener prefers, the same refusal made by a single teller.

The condition for a declined reveal is that the question must be visibly declined, not forgotten: the book must keep it before the reader and close its other questions around it. The Ending (Chapter 16) made the same demand of the household’s mother, whose reason for changing the locks the book never gives. Hers is a declined reveal without an epistemological structure, since no competing accounts are offered, only a silence kept in view. A declined reveal that is not visible is an abandoned thread.

How far a close may recast a book: the teller rule

The Chapter Break (Chapter 6) proposed the recasting close, a chapter ending that changes the meaning of the chapter it closes, and found that over-delivered it voids the chapter it closes. The Ending (Chapter 16) ruled that the category stops discriminating at a book’s last line and passed on the question it leaves: how far a close may recast a whole book.

The answer distinguishes two things a closing reveal can do to earlier pages. It can reinterpret them, giving a second meaning to passages whose first meaning stays true as a description of what the reader was shown; and it can falsify them, declaring that what the reader was shown did not happen. The range of a reveal is the set of passages it recasts in either way. Reinterpretation may extend as far as the double reading holds. Falsification is governed by the teller rule: a reveal may falsify only passages that a teller in the book, a narrator, a diarist, a character telling a story, could have shaped, and only if the reveal identifies the teller and the book gives the teller a reason. Atonement falsifies its reunion scene and survives, because the coda identifies Briony as its author and her motive as atonement; The Murder of Roger Ackroyd falsifies nothing, since Sheppard’s narration omits but does not state an untruth, and its range is the whole book by reinterpretation alone. An ending that declares the book a dream, or a simulation that nobody in the book was writing, falsifies passages the narration vouched for on its own authority, and voids the book as the over-delivered recasting close voids its chapter.

The recasting close therefore needs no separate category at book scale. A close may recast a whole book when every passage it recasts survives the double reading or lies within a teller’s account.

See also: the full treatment, section 3, with the extended catalogue (the false reveal, the serial reveal, the reveal of world) and a summary table of objects, positions and ranges.