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Chapter 5 · The Transition

4. The Taxonomy

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The taxonomy names six ways of spending the orientation budget, so that write a transition becomes a choice among options with known costs, and the commonest fault at the join, the same instrument at every gap, becomes visible as a choice. The categories describe strategies, not sentences, and a single join often braids two. They are not ranked: the hard cut is not more sophisticated than the time-stamp, only cheaper at the join and dearer at the arrival. And they answer which, never how many.

The hard cut

The hard cut crosses a gap with no bridging language: the unit ends, white space or a chapter number intervenes, and the next unit begins inside its own material and orients the reader in its first sentences while getting on with its business. It spends nothing at the join, which is why it is now the default and why its failures are common: it transfers the whole cost to the new unit’s opening sentence, and succeeds when that sentence can carry the load.

Two conditions predict success. The first is that the launching line, this chapter’s term for the last sentence before the gap, has done preparatory work: a departure that names a place, an object or a person pre-builds the frame, and the cut then delivers what the reader is already reaching for. Scene and Sequel’s decision beat (Chapter 2) is the formal version. The second is a low dimension count. A rule of thumb that survives most cases: hard-cut across one dimension freely, across two with a clear anchor, across three only into a frame the reader already holds, and across four almost never unless disorientation is the effect wanted. Tolstoy executes the chapter-level alternation of Anna Karenina (1878) by hard cuts, a chapter ending in Petersburg and the next opening on Levin’s estate, with a name in the first sentence and a place in the second. Under-delivered, the hard cut is the orphaned cut; over-delivered, a manuscript of fragments whose reader cannot say how much time the book covers.

The time-stamp

The time-stamp states elapsed time or temporal position at the head of the new unit: Three days later. In April. By the time the shop reopened. It is the cheapest reliable orientation in the language, and its bad name comes from defaulting, the numerical stamp at every gap whether or not the interval matters.

The remedy is to use its varieties. Besides the relative interval there are the absolute date, the event-relative stamp (after the funeral), clock time (which implies a world where the hour matters), the seasonal or liturgical stamp (by Michaelmas), the stamp measured on a body (when the bruise had gone yellow), the iterative (all that autumn), and the dated heading set above the prose. The event-relative form shows how a stamp can cost less by spending more. Three days later, she went back to the house is nine words and delivers time. The day after the funeral, she went back to the house is eleven, and the two extra words deliver a death, a reason, and the weight of the house, so that the orientation comes free with the story. Some weeks later is not a weaker three weeks later but a claim that the exact interval does not matter. And drafts tend to stamp a cut of two hours and leave a cut of two years to inference, the wrong way round, since small intervals can be inferred from context and large ones cannot. Gabriel García Márquez turns the instrument against itself in One Hundred Years of Solitude (1967; translated by Gregory Rabassa), where it rains for four years, eleven months and two days: a definite interval stated with a chronicle’s authority, whose content is impossible.

The match-cut

The match-cut, or echo transition, crosses a gap on a repetition: a word, image, action, sound or sentence shape at the end of one unit recurs, changed, at the start of the next, so that the join carries meaning. It is the only technique whose purpose is not orientation; it orients as a by-product and buys an argument, on Eisenstein’s principle that two things placed side by side produce a third that is in neither. The screen’s best-known case is the cut in Stanley Kubrick’s 2001: A Space Odyssey (1968) from a bone thrown into the air by a hominid to an orbiting satellite, which the film leaves unidentified and Arthur C. Clarke’s novel makes an orbital weapon: one cut joins the first tool to the latest and says they are the same thing.

Its failure is invisibility: a reader who misses the echo has lost nothing she knows of, and the writer cannot detect the loss. Hence a floor: an echo must be detectable on a first reading at ordinary speed by a reader not looking for it, and an echo found only on rereading is a reward for rereading, not a transition. Three things raise detectability without ostentation: proximity (the echo at the very end of one unit and the very start of the next), distinctiveness (an unusual word, or an ordinary one used unusually), and difference (the same object changed, which reads as an argument, where pure repetition reads as a stutter). The most reliable form is ironic inversion, the same element with the opposite value. Dickens shows how high the ceiling of ostentation goes when his narrator in Bleak House (1853) asks outright what connexion there can be between the place in Lincolnshire, the house in town and Jo, the outlaw with the broom.

The summary bridge

The summary bridge narrates the interval itself in compressed form: For the next three weeks nothing was decided. Dov came in on Saturdays; the stock did not move. It is the only technique that puts content in the gap, and on Sternberg’s argument the position after a break is where such content is welcome. Some intervals hold necessary material that does not deserve a scene; summary is the only mode that can render duration, since a reader feels time pass by traversing something, and its negative form (nothing was decided; nobody rang) gives an interval a shape; and it is where a narrator may say what things amounted to. Its difficulty is the hand-over, the second transition from summary into scene, and the repair is mechanical: end the bridge on a specific occasion, so that the last sentence of the summary is the first of the scene. Austen’s bridges of two or three sentences, in which a winter passes or a family removes to Bath, carry the working rule: summarise what the reader can be trusted to imagine, and dramatise what will surprise her. John Steinbeck raises the bridge to a whole chapter in The Grapes of Wrath (1939), whose twelfth chapter renders Highway 66, the mother road, as the migration in aggregate. Under-delivered, the bridge leaves an interval that mattered crossed with nothing; over-delivered, it becomes throat-clearing or recap.

The handoff

The handoff changes whose consciousness the reader occupies, or where she is, or both, and it is the standard join of any novel with more than one thread. It is the most expensive technique, because it typically changes protagonist, place, time and goal at once, and the reader is handling four shifts at once. The additive cost gives three rules. Reduce the dimension count where the book allows, by handing off when two characters share a room, an hour or an object. Anchor with a name at once, since the proper name is the only anchor that settles the protagonist in one word. And declare the pattern early, because a reader who knows the book alternates performs frame recall at each later join: the first handoff is expensive and the twelfth, in a book with a legible pattern, nearly free. Paula Hawkins’s The Girl on the Train (2015) pays its handoffs paratextually, heading each section with the narrator’s name and a date, and sometimes Morning or Evening: Rachel’s first section is dated Friday, 5 July 2013, and Megan’s first, Wednesday, 16 May 2012, so that a heading alone tells the reader that the second voice is a year behind the first. A reader pulled away from a thread at its height, which is The Chapter Break’s subject (Chapter 6), will be less patient with a slow arrival, not more.

A proposed sixth: the bridging object

One recurring practice fits none of the five and is usually taught as a kind of match-cut. The bridging object is a physical thing that exists on both sides of a gap and whose presence in the new unit does the anchoring: the coat on the hook, the ledger, the key, the car in the street. A match-cut joins two units by resemblance; a bridging object joins them by identity. The reader is oriented not by being told where she is but by recognising something she already knows, so the operation is frame recall, not interpretation, and it is faster and more reliable. Its carriers are the definite article, the absence of re-description, a changed condition (elapsed time delivered in the word that delivers place), and a transfer of custody (a handoff and an anchor together). It needs a distinctive object, planted early, which gives the argument of The Descriptive Detail (Chapter 4) a structural payoff, and it is the only transition technique that improves with repetition, because the object delivers whatever it has come to mean. In Mrs Dalloway (1925) the motor car with drawn blinds moving up Bond Street passes through one consciousness after another, joining them by being in each.

Three objections stand. It may be a carrier, not a technique: every join needs an anchor, the resumed object is one of the anchor types in The Mechanism, and any of the five techniques can land on one. The distinction between identity and resemblance may not survive scrutiny, since the reader meets only a second occurrence of a noun and infers that the referent is the same by the route a match-cut uses. And a category for recurring objects invites one for recurring sounds, phrases and weather patterns without limit. This chapter adopts the bridging object for revision, because the advice it yields — plant it, particularise it, use the definite article, do not re-describe it — differs enough from the match-cut’s to be worth separating, and it concedes the second objection as unanswered. Non-linear and Multi-timeline Architecture (Chapter 8), which joins whole timelines rather than scenes, adopts it at the scale of a book as a means of convergence by identity, on condition that the object’s condition or custody changes between appearances, which answers the second objection at that scale.

Must a join use only one?

No. Compounding is normal; the fault is compounding a technique with its own redundancy, such as a stamp followed by a summary of the same interval, and the test is whether the second element resolves a dimension the first did not. Some gaps need no technique at all, such as a paragraph break of ninety seconds between two moments of one scene. The question is never which technique is best, but what this gap costs.

See also: the Reference techniques, with each technique’s textual carriers, its illustrations and a summary table; the Reference worked analyses, on Mrs Dalloway’s car and aeroplane and on Anna Karenina’s alternation.